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When a cursed camera captures pictures of predestined murders, a cakera collector must unravel mysteries of the occult device to stop her husband’s gruesome fate.
It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that. To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about. I also secoRead more
It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that.
To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about.
I also second dpg, make sure you are specifc on what the camera can actually do. ?Is it a camera that causes/sets death in motion like the video in The Ring or does it predict the circumstances around death like the pictures taken in Final Destination 3?
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You have done a great job introducing the cast of characters but what are the stakes? ?Where does the conflict come in? ?I?m assuming it has something to do with the Russian gang leader but why is it important that he?s a Russian gang leader? ?What conflict/stake does she bring to the plot that coulRead more
You have done a great job introducing the cast of characters but what are the stakes? ?Where does the conflict come in? ?I?m assuming it has something to do with the Russian gang leader but why is it important that he?s a Russian gang leader? ?What conflict/stake does she bring to the plot that could potentially derail the protagonists? ability to succeed?
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