1. Posted: October 23, 2016In:

    After a deadly contagion takes his wife & daughter, a special forces operative must infiltrate the very military base he was once stationed to find the cure & exact his revenge.

    Deanna Murray Logliner

    let's see if I got it right this time ....

    let’s see if I got it right this time ….

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  2. Posted: October 23, 2016In:

    After a deadly contagion takes his wife & daughter, a special forces operative must infiltrate the very military base he was once stationed to find the cure & exact his revenge.

    Deanna Murray Logliner

    Would it make more sense to do something like this: A disillusioned special forces operative abandons his military career only to be forced into action again when a deadly outbreak reeks of government conspiracy & threatens his family.

    Would it make more sense to do something like this:

    A disillusioned special forces operative abandons his military career only to be forced into action again when a deadly outbreak reeks of government conspiracy & threatens his family.

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  3. Posted: October 23, 2016In:

    After a deadly contagion takes his wife & daughter, a special forces operative must infiltrate the very military base he was once stationed to find the cure & exact his revenge.

    Deanna Murray Logliner

    I'm sorry all .... I tried to edit the last one -- but it wouldn't allow me ... Anyway, I appreciate all the feedback and am doing my best to adjust & get things right!

    I’m sorry all …. I tried to edit the last one — but it wouldn’t allow me … Anyway, I appreciate all the feedback and am doing my best to adjust & get things right!

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