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When dark and disturbing children’s drawings come alive. Its creator, a little girl distressed and insecure, must face and erase these drawings from her life before they control her forever.
Great concept! I like your second revision. It's not clear to me, though, what the stakes are in that second revision. WHY must she find a way to get rid of her disturbing art creations, and HOW are they tormenting her? I like that the drawings are coming to life, and I'd try to keep that element. 'Read more
Great concept! I like your second revision.
It’s not clear to me, though, what the stakes are in that second revision. WHY must she find a way to get rid of her disturbing art creations, and HOW are they tormenting her?
I like that the drawings are coming to life, and I’d try to keep that element. ‘When her terrifying drawings come to life, a young orphan must find a way to stop her own nightmare images from killing her.’ For example.
Keep it up!
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Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through ...!
Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through …!
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