1. Posted: August 5, 2013In:

    When two escaped convicts get trapped on a runaway train, they must stop the train and evade the jail warden by being a team

    Deepak Penpusher

    dgp, i agree with you. my logline was missing the hook. I will concentrate on incorporating the hook of the story. Thanks.

    dgp, i agree with you. my logline was missing the hook. I will concentrate on incorporating the hook of the story. Thanks.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2013In:

    When two escaped convicts get trapped on a runaway train, they must stop the train and evade the jail warden by being a team

    Deepak Penpusher

    dgp: This logline is from a 90's movie written by Akira Kurosawa which I recently watched. I am trying to get the jist of the story in the logline. Rookie - to me means an inexperienced prisoner. I believe the information I have given summarises the movie.

    dgp: This logline is from a 90’s movie written by Akira Kurosawa which I recently watched. I am trying to get the jist of the story in the logline.

    Rookie – to me means an inexperienced prisoner. I believe the information I have given summarises the movie.

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  3. Posted: August 5, 2013In:

    When two escaped convicts get trapped on a runaway train, they must stop the train and evade the jail warden by being a team

    Deepak Penpusher

    "When an innocent convict and a rookie escape prison and get trapped on an unmanned speeding train, they must stop it and evade the menacing jail warden by being a team" Does this help dgp & Chris? I have not provided the information before because the log line must be within 25 words.

    “When an innocent convict and a rookie escape prison and get trapped on an unmanned speeding train, they must stop it and evade the menacing jail warden by being a team”

    Does this help dgp & Chris? I have not provided the information before because the log line must be within 25 words.

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