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  1. Posted: May 8, 2016In: Horror

    When a killer starts following the script seven actors deserted on a movie set must re-write their own ending before they die BEHIND THE SCENES.

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    Added an answer on May 10, 2016 at 8:57 am

    Even more really great thoughts/advise. Thank you. I do have a main protagonist. A once, almost scream queen who has aged and this is her come back opportunity. She begins as the mentor to the young, new comer. I'll have to try and work to see how to incorporate the logline and the protagonist. I foRead more

    Even more really great thoughts/advise. Thank you.
    I do have a main protagonist. A once, almost scream queen who has aged and this is her come back opportunity. She begins as the mentor to the young, new comer.
    I’ll have to try and work to see how to incorporate the logline and the protagonist. I focused on the plot because it was difficult to keep it pithy and connect the dots between the high concept and the protagonist. Might be worth a shot to see if it can be combined.
    Again, much appreciated feedback.

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