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Upon being marked by a shadow creature with a hunger for humans, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and forced to confront his identity or face losing himself.
Does this one read better? : After being marked by a ravenous shadow creature, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and with the help of an exotic strange woman, he is forced to confront his identity or face losing himself and the woman he loves.
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See lessAfter being marked by a ravenous shadow creature, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and with the help of an exotic strange woman, he is forced to confront his identity or face losing himself and the woman he loves.
Upon being marked by a shadow creature with a hunger for humans, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and forced to confront his identity or face losing himself.
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