1. Posted: April 25, 2018In:

    After a drunken hookup at a work party, an ad-exec realizes that he is in love with his ?work wife.? He must decide whether to profess his feelings or keep their relationship as is before she moves out of state with her boyfriend.

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    I would like to know why it's so important for him to confess his feelings toward his work wife? Is the ad exec married? Is he not happy with his marriage? If he is, what is it about his work wife that it's worth risking his marriage? Assuming he knows she has a boyfriend, why would he want to profeRead more

    I would like to know why it’s so important for him to confess his feelings toward his work wife? Is the ad exec married? Is he not happy with his marriage? If he is, what is it about his work wife that it’s worth risking his marriage?

    Assuming he knows she has a boyfriend, why would he want to profess his feelings toward her?

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2018In:

    The paranormal cases led a spiritual scientist to a mysterious world – a place where Vietnamese folklores collide and reveal a terrible curse between the Dragon and Fairy families, where she will finally find her destiny.

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    This does sound like an interesting story.? I see it more as a fantasy rather than horror (which is the genre you put it in). The logline is a tad long and there is information that we really don't need. You don't need to write "paranormal" cases or name the type of families. Also, I'd like to knowRead more

    This does sound like an interesting story.? I see it more as a fantasy rather than horror (which is the genre you put it in). The logline is a tad long and there is information that we really don’t need. You don’t need to write “paranormal” cases or name the type of families.

    Also, I’d like to know more about her destiny. Is it to undo the curse that is set to the “Dragon” and “Fairy” families?

    If it is, perhaps the logline could be something like:

    “A spiritual scientist is pulled into a mysterious, fantasy-filled world where she must undo a curse that has plagued two families.”

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