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  1. Posted: January 30, 2021In: SciFi

    LEGION OF ONE – When a rogue AI threatens to exterminate the world’s population, a gutsy cyber agent streams into the mind of a psychotic hacker to retrieve the shutdown code. Does this logline sound like a winner?

    DionysusJG Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 1, 2021 at 10:02 pm

    This sounds similar in premise and structure to the J-Lo movie "The Cell". I can't find the official logline for it, but perhaps see if you can track it down for reference. Here's the IMDB Synopsis: An F.B.I. Agent persuades a social worker, who is adept with a new experimental technology, to enterRead more

    This sounds similar in premise and structure to the J-Lo movie “The Cell”. I can’t find the official logline for it, but perhaps see if you can track it down for reference.

    Here’s the IMDB Synopsis:
    An F.B.I. Agent persuades a social worker, who is adept with a new experimental technology, to enter the mind of a comatose serial killer in order to learn where he has hidden his latest kidnap victim.

    Good luck.

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2017In: Thriller

    A romancing recluse yachtsman and cameo actress discover one another career tramps team up to fleece the jet set but recluses ex returns to rekindle love with revenge as a IRS sting – SuperTramps

    DionysusJG Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 1, 2021 at 9:55 pm

    1. What does 'romancing' mean in this context? 2. What does 'discover one another' mean in this context? - more detail needed. 3. I think some punctuation and grammatical correction may be needed here to clarify your meaning and intentions. 4. What is a "Career Tramp"? Is that a grifter? 5. What isRead more

    1. What does ‘romancing’ mean in this context?
    2. What does ‘discover one another’ mean in this context? – more detail needed.
    3. I think some punctuation and grammatical correction may be needed here to clarify your meaning and intentions.
    4. What is a “Career Tramp”? Is that a grifter?
    5. What is a “jet set” in this context?
    6. Perhaps you should give the Yachtsman more detail than being a recluse… after all… once the adventure starts, he’s not particularly reclusive any more, is he? 🙂
    7. What has the Yachtsman’s ex got to do with the IRS sting, and why does she want revenge?
    8. What is the problem that needs solving and how do they solve it.
    9. What is the change/personal challenge that the main character/s need to overcome?
    10. Perhaps more detail about the actress’ character? A defining character attribute or flaw?

    good luck!

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