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  1. Posted: August 19, 2019In: Drama

    When the local mining company brings in external workers, the town of Hope apathetically slides towards its death. Slut-shamed 17-year-old schoolgirl, Tim, challenges the locals, the politicians,?and the mining billionaires into establishing a renewable energy business, in a frantic effort to save the town – and herself.

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    Thank you again. You are both quite right. I will go back to the original premise and look at more of your examples of loglines.  

    Thank you again. You are both quite right. I will go back to the original premise and look at more of your examples of loglines.

     

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2019In: Drama

    When a disgraced schoolgirl is sent home, she finds her rural outback town dying. With everything hopeless, she sets about to remake the town, fighting with corrupt politicians, billionaire mining magnets and ?apathetic ?townspeople to create a prosperous future.

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    I'm a bit unsure about how to re-post. But here is a rework of the logline idea. When the local mining company brings in external workers, the town of Hope apathetically slides towards it's death. Slut-shamed 17 year old school girl, Tim, challenges the locals, the politicians and the mining billionRead more

    I’m a bit unsure about how to re-post. But here is a rework of the logline idea.

    When the local mining company brings in external workers, the town of Hope apathetically slides towards it’s death. Slut-shamed 17 year old school girl, Tim, challenges the locals, the politicians and the mining billionaires into establishing a renewable energy business, in a frantic effort to save the town – and herself.

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  3. Posted: August 8, 2019In: Drama

    When a disgraced schoolgirl is sent home, she finds her rural outback town dying. With everything hopeless, she sets about to remake the town, fighting with corrupt politicians, billionaire mining magnets and ?apathetic ?townspeople to create a prosperous future.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2019 at 8:43 pm

    Thank you so much! Your reviews have provided me with direction. Leave it with me to stew for a bit.

    Thank you so much! Your reviews have provided me with direction. Leave it with me to stew for a bit.

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