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A trio of drag queens orchestrate a prison break to rescue their transgender roommate after she is wrongly incarcerated in a men’s facility.
It's a pretty good logline, however trans and drag queens aren't the same thing. Perhaps your script isn't meant to be politically correct? But you put it in action. In this case I would imagine it to be more of a comedy.
It’s a pretty good logline, however trans and drag queens aren’t the same thing. Perhaps your script isn’t meant to be politically correct? But you put it in action. In this case I would imagine it to be more of a comedy.
See lessAfter saving an mistreated puppy, a young doctor sets out forming new friendships, helping those in need.
I've got the setup: "When a young doctor finds a mistreated puppy" however, everything else is fluff that doesn't mean anything. Who's lives do they save, or what kind anyway, and why should I be interested? What do you actually mean by "forming friendships and living life to the fullest?" It's a goRead more
I’ve got the setup: “When a young doctor finds a mistreated puppy” however, everything else is fluff that doesn’t mean anything.
Who’s lives do they save, or what kind anyway, and why should I be interested?
What do you actually mean by “forming friendships and living life to the fullest?”
It’s a good setup. There are endless possibilities and directions you could take this story, but I would start with that setup, and then consider the story (conflict) you want to tell is.
See lessA young police officer must prevent a bomb exploding aboard a city bus by keeping its speed above 50 mph.
Yeah, that pretty much says it. Haha. I really don't think this screenplay would have ever been sold had it been written another way.
Yeah, that pretty much says it. Haha. I really don’t think this screenplay would have ever been sold had it been written another way.
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