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  1. Posted: August 14, 2013

    A man with no memory is trapped in a mysterious hotel, controlled by an oppressive host who forces him to to catch a killer among the guests in exchange for the truth of his identity.

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    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 7:56 am

    The problem with sci-fi and fantasy genres is that they entail a suspension or revision of one or more of the rules of the normal world; ergo, while the world of your story makes perfect sense to you the creator that world, it's completely terra incognita to the rest of us; it doesn't make immediateRead more

    The problem with sci-fi and fantasy genres is that they entail a suspension or revision of one or more of the rules of the normal world; ergo, while the world of your story makes perfect sense to you the creator that world, it’s completely terra incognita to the rest of us; it doesn’t make immediate sense.

    So, for example, your logline says that your protagonist has “no memory”. Well, then how can he possibly possess the knowledge and skills to do whatever he’s supposed to do?

    Why would the “oppressive host” employ the character to “do his bidding” when he is crippled with such a debilitating, cognitive deficit?

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  2. Posted: August 14, 2013

    A man with no memory is trapped in a mysterious hotel, controlled by an oppressive host who forces him to to catch a killer among the guests in exchange for the truth of his identity.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 7:33 am

    What's the genre of the story?

    What’s the genre of the story?

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  3. Posted: August 14, 2013

    A man with no memory is trapped in a mysterious hotel, controlled by an oppressive host who forces him to to catch a killer among the guests in exchange for the truth of his identity.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 7:32 am

    What's the genre of story?

    What’s the genre of story?

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