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  1. Posted: March 4, 2018In: Western

    (Re-post) Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2018 at 5:01 am

    Why an ex-confederate?? Why not an ex-Union soldier?Being an ex-confederate means he fought on the wrong side for the wrong cause. Why should an audience root for someone who fought to keep Blacks oppressed and exploited?In time past there?have been westerns with ex-Confederate protagonists.? Like "Read more

    Why an ex-confederate?? Why not an ex-Union soldier?

    Being an ex-confederate means he fought on the wrong side for the wrong cause. Why should an audience root for someone who fought to keep Blacks oppressed and exploited?

    In time past there?have been westerns with ex-Confederate protagonists.? Like “The Outlaw Josey Wales” and “The Searchers”.

    But these are? “woke times”.? Ex-confederate characters no longer get a free pass.

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  2. Posted: March 4, 2018In: Thriller

    When an armed soldier takes a junior class hostage, two rookie teachers are forced to defend their class.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2018 at 4:51 am

    The awful truth is more compelling than this fiction.? What does this story have to say that rises above the level of mere exploitation and manipulation of an ongoing national tragedy?

    The awful truth is more compelling than this fiction.? What does this story have to say that rises above the level of mere exploitation and manipulation of an ongoing national tragedy?

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  3. Posted: February 28, 2018In: SciFi

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    Added an answer on March 1, 2018 at 9:29 am

    At 80 words the sentence is far too long to be evaluated as a logline.? Most of the text is devoted to convoluted? backstory information instead of a clear, concise? statement of the story moving forward from an inciting incident.IOW: after all is said,? nothing is done.? There is no plot.Please revRead more

    At 80 words the sentence is far too long to be evaluated as a logline.? Most of the text is devoted to convoluted? backstory information instead of a clear, concise? statement of the story moving forward from an inciting incident.

    IOW: after all is said,? nothing is done.? There is no plot.

    Please review the basic plot elements outlined under “Our Formula”.?

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