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  1. Posted: August 19, 2016In: Comedy

    I did jot know where to post this question so I wrote it here. My question was: Is writing a logline same for a short film, feature film and Documentary. Very rudimentary question but I was curious.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2016 at 12:40 am

    Very good question. ?And I beg to differ somewhat from Moses99. The short answer is that the same logline format for a feature film usually applies for short films , as well as TV or SM (streaming media) series. ?In the case of a series, the logline usually focuses on the plot of the pilot episode tRead more

    Very good question. ?And I beg to differ somewhat from Moses99.

    The short answer is that the same logline format for a feature film usually applies for short films , as well as TV or SM (streaming media) series. ?In the case of a series, the logline usually focuses on the plot of the pilot episode that launches the series.

    The purpose of a ?logline is to promote a?script?for a work of fiction? Documentaries, non-fictional stories, ?are a different species. ?AFAIK, they are pitched in terms of the subject matter, not a script because there is no script. ?(Although there may be an outline.) ?A documentary story is fully discovered and composed as the video is shot and edited.

     

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  2. Posted: August 19, 2016In: Thriller

    The story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2016 at 8:00 am

    Dkpough1's revision is certainly an improvement. ?However if it's ?an accident, why the search for a culprit? ?So I would suggest ?word accident in quotes to suggest that things are not as they seem. ?It's more than an accident it's, ?a mysterious "accident". Also it's not exactly accurate to say thRead more

    Dkpough1’s revision is certainly an improvement. ?However if it’s ?an accident, why the search for a culprit? ?So I would suggest ?word accident in quotes to suggest that things are not as they seem. ?It’s more than an accident it’s, ?a mysterious “accident”.

    Also it’s not exactly accurate to say that they all suspect each other. ?Obviously at least one of them knows who dunnit–the actual murderer. ?So the story is a murder mystery where from the audience’s perspective, everyone is a suspect. ?It seems to me the logline — and story — ?would benefit from a protagonist, a first among equals, who takes the lead in asking the questions, discovering evidence.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: August 18, 2016In: Comedy

    A woman decides to sabotage her best friend’s wedding when she realizes her former fiance is proposing to her.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2016 at 12:35 am

    Please clarify: ?whose "former fiancee"? ? Former fiancee of the protagonist or of her friend?Either way, I don't understand why she wants to sabotage her friend's wedding because of an action of a 3rd party. ? This obviously brings to mind "My Best Friend's Wedding" in which the protagonist pursuesRead more

    Please clarify: ?whose “former fiancee”? ? Former fiancee of the protagonist or of her friend?

    Either way, I don’t understand why she wants to sabotage her friend’s wedding because of an action of a 3rd party. ? This obviously brings to mind “My Best Friend’s Wedding” in which the protagonist pursues ?the wrong objective goal, but at least ?she has a clearer and credible motivation.

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