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After his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.
He has the ability to time travel.!!!???Then the genre is SciFi, not romance.And time traveling should be in the logline.(Time traveling to do what?? What is his objective goal?)
He has the ability to time travel.
!!!???
Then the genre is SciFi, not romance.
And time traveling should be in the logline.
(Time traveling to do what?? What is his objective goal?)
See lessAfter his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.
After his wife dies, a Marine with PTSD struggles to raise his daughter.That, in 13 words is the the essence of the premise.? For the purpose of a logline, the rest is extraneous yada-yada..Now, what's the story hook?
After his wife dies, a Marine with PTSD struggles to raise his daughter.
That, in 13 words is the the essence of the premise.? For the purpose of a logline, the rest is extraneous yada-yada..
Now, what’s the story hook?
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At 56 words, the logline is just too long.? The sweet spot for logline length is in the range of 20-30 words.? Try the 6 word story idea strategy.? Trimming off all the excess, what, at the core, is the story all about?? Suggest finding and focusing on the story hook, building from there.
At 56 words, the logline is just too long.? The sweet spot for logline length is in the range of 20-30 words.?
Try the 6 word story idea strategy.? Trimming off all the excess, what, at the core, is the story all about?? Suggest finding and focusing on the story hook, building from there.
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