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  1. Posted: June 6, 2016In: Drama

    A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 5:17 am

    This concept sounds like an interesting drama. ?But the story revolving around homeless people doesn't work for me. ?I would prefer to see this story told around people just like me trapped in a train station and struggling to survive as their personal conflicts escalate out of control. ?That wouldRead more

    This concept sounds like an interesting drama. ?But the story revolving around homeless people doesn’t work for me. ?I would prefer to see this story told around people just like me trapped in a train station and struggling to survive as their personal conflicts escalate out of control. ?That would feel like a story ripe with social commentary and interesting ideas. ?And I could easily buy that regular people could be trapped at a train station. ?Especially a small one in the winter.

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