Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: February 28, 2016In: Examples

    When a magic trick turns fatal on one of their wives, two magician friends turn rivals to create the ultimate stage illusion with dangerous consequences. The Prestige

    EmmaMcK Logliner
    Added an answer on March 1, 2016 at 12:57 pm

    This made me want to watch it again!! It's not clear here who the protagonist is. It also sounds like they turn rivals so they can create the ultimate stage illusion (together?) but in actual fact as a result of turning rivals they are trying to outdo each other with who has the more impressive stagRead more

    This made me want to watch it again!!
    It’s not clear here who the protagonist is. It also sounds like they turn rivals so they can create the ultimate stage illusion (together?) but in actual fact as a result of turning rivals they are trying to outdo each other with who has the more impressive stage illusion.
    I would pick one of them as the protagonist (who has the biggest arc/revelation?) and you might be able to make it more specific and hint to the intriguing nature of the film by following the story from one perspective.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 2

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 7,997
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,710

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.