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  1. Posted: July 1, 2016In: Drama

    A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.

    Erica Samurai
    Added an answer on July 2, 2016 at 12:45 am

    I think for me, the phrase "Street Stupid Teen" is what turns me off from even wanting to care in the first place.?? With Breaking Bad, we cared for Walter right out of the gate and just kept rooting for him even as he sank further and further from noble to down right criminal.? The "psychotic" copRead more

    I think for me, the phrase “Street Stupid Teen” is what turns me off from even wanting to care in the first place.?? With Breaking Bad, we cared for Walter right out of the gate and just kept rooting for him even as he sank further and further from noble to down right criminal.? The “psychotic” cop seems like something just thrown in to create tension.?? If the kid is selling drugs, why does the cop have to be crazy?

    “A grieving young street kid struggles to make it big in Hollywood at any cost while being chase by the cops for stealing drugs from a crime scene.”

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