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Knocked out and put in cryosleep for 30 years, a space soldier wakes up only to find his wife murdered and his child gone. His search for vengeance and motives will be tested upon finding out that it was his son the one responsible for the crime.
I agree with Odie. Leave out the Knocked out part and it feels like it is headed in the right direction.
I agree with Odie. Leave out the Knocked out part and it feels like it is headed in the right direction.
See lessA disgruntled TV producer participate in a deadly game show at his workplace which is cursed with deadly spirits.
Interesting. Is he 'being on" it? It may sound stronger by saying "participating in". Is the producer cursed or the show? You may want to consider swapping "who" with "which". Sounds interesting.
Interesting. Is he ‘being on” it? It may sound stronger by saying “participating in”. Is the producer cursed or the show? You may want to consider swapping “who” with “which”. Sounds interesting.
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