1. Posted: November 6, 2017In:

    When homicidal maniac escapes his cell in a locked-down mental health institution, greenhorn security guard must take a stand to survive and protect other patients.

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    Hey JanCabal, Good job! Sounds really interesting, something for a low budget film with only a few locations. Will this be a short or a feature? I cannot make it better at the moment. Thanks! Aschwin

    Hey JanCabal,

    Good job!
    Sounds really interesting, something for a low budget film with only a few locations.
    Will this be a short or a feature?
    I cannot make it better at the moment.

    Thanks!

    Aschwin

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  2. Posted: October 24, 2017In:

    A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.

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    Hi Rhea, Thank you for sharing your logline with us. This is for me also the first time to comment on another logline... I really try to understand what you want to tell with this logline. A logline needs 3 things: 1. A protoganist 2. A goal. 3. An antagonist force that stands in its way As I undersRead more

    Hi Rhea,

    Thank you for sharing your logline with us.
    This is for me also the first time to comment on another logline…

    I really try to understand what you want to tell with this logline.
    A logline needs 3 things:
    1. A protoganist
    2. A goal.
    3. An antagonist force that stands in its way

    As I understand thus far is that a mother with two clone children wants to have save a environment for them, which is understandable, but what stands in her way to get to that place?
    and her lover not really relevant in her logline as i can see it now.

    Hope this helps.

    Thanks,

    Aschwin

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