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When her younger sister get selected to compete from their districts, the caring big sister voluntarily gets into a struggle between life and death. /Julia from Stellas Account
I agree with the logline being too vague. We're not made aware of what these districts are or what the competition is. Also, what are the stakes? You vaguely touch on life and death but not enough to really pique interstate or do justice to the story. It's a great jumping off point though.
I agree with the logline being too vague. We’re not made aware of what these districts are or what the competition is. Also, what are the stakes? You vaguely touch on life and death but not enough to really pique interstate or do justice to the story. It’s a great jumping off point though.
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