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A roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy struggles to recover a time machine hidden within Elvis Presley?s Graceland in order to defeat an alien psychopath hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.
A lovesick roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy?has 48 hours to find and?use the time?machine hidden in a secret chamber?under Graceland?to win the heart of an alcoholic prostitute and?defeat a psychotic alien?hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.
A lovesick roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy?has 48 hours to find and?use the time?machine hidden in a secret chamber?under Graceland?to win the heart of an alcoholic prostitute and?defeat a psychotic alien?hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.
See lessWorking title: MISSLE (or GOD OF DESTRUCTION) Logline: After helplessly witnessing his brother murdered by a vicious gang, a disabled man in LA sets out one night on his homemade killing machine to seek vengeance.
?Working title: MISSLE (or GOD OF DESTRUCTION) Logline:? After helplessly witnessing his brother murdered by a vicious gang, a disabled man in LA?sets out one night on his homemade killing machine to seek vengeance. HOOK(S):? How is his brother viciously murdered? How disabled is he? ?How does a disRead more
Logline:?
After helplessly witnessing his brother murdered by a vicious gang, a disabled man in LA?sets out one night on his homemade killing machine to seek vengeance.
HOOK(S):?
How is his brother viciously murdered?
How disabled is he? ?How does a disabled man get around?
WTF?is?this ?homemade killing machine?, and what does it look like?
Quick INCOMPLETE idea/ jist:
Adi is a devout Hindu Indian man. ?His disabled brother Krishna is also Indian and Hindu. ?Adi works the snack shop counter of a gas station. ?Sometimes Adi bring?s Krishna with him just to keep him company.? There?s a Mexican mechanic named Angel (pronounced Aan-Hell), who works the little car repair garage attached to the snack shop. Angel has a very nice relationship with Adi and Krishna. Angel happens to be an Iraqi war veteran with two tours under his belt.
Before moving to LA, Adi was an auto rickshaw operator is Mumbai, India. ?Adi?has always liked motorcycles and by chance Angel is also a bike enthusiast so naturally they click and chat about bikes all time time.
One late night when Adi is working and Krishna is there with him a group of men rob the snack shop, murder Adi, and?flip Krishna?s wheelchair so he?s laying there in his brother?s blood staring into Adi?s dead eyes.
Angel is not present during the robbery.
It is then?Angel who helps Krishna build the killing machine by taking a BMW S1000rr, armor plating it, adding all sorts of performance parts, weaponizing it somehow ..ak 47 maybe idk,? and who knows what else. ?It?s possible that when Krishna is on the bike, Angel is with him on headset (or better yet watching a live real time feed Go-Pro) during the entire night Krishna is hunting and killing the criminals who killed his brother. ?Off the bike Krishna has terrible coordination and can?barely walk. ?On the?bike he is?able to move his fingers and feet to control the bike.
Maybe Angel is feeding krishna information also (like real time traffic information, stoplight timing information, maybe remote places to quickly gas up).
As for the gang, I haven?t thought about the ethnicity, but maybe it could be?something unorthodox like a cold, sadistic North Korean, Anti- american Kim Jong Un worshipping cell (made up of koreans and some wayward african americans and whites and whoever whom ALL pledge allegiance to Kim Jong Un).
All of this isn?t fully fleshed out but I would like your feedback (and anyone else?s) if you have time.
Thanks guys
See lessMISSLE: Limited fuel and the LAPD heat leave a severely disabled man just one night on his two- wheeled hand-built killing machine to seek and destroy the gang that brutally murdered his brother.
feel like I do need to add the fact that their is a time limit or denote that time is of the essence in my longline. ? I think in this retooling of the logline I am successfully establishing the protagonist, what he wants, a time limit, and the inciting incident the hook is he is disabled. ?so he haRead more
feel like I do need to add the fact that their is a time limit or denote that time is of the essence in my longline. ? I think in this retooling of the logline I am successfully establishing the protagonist, what he wants, a time limit, and the inciting incident
the hook is he is disabled. ?so he has limited movement. and I think a second “hook” is ” What exactly IS this killing machine?? ?and wtf does it look like?”?
So here goes another crack at it and please let me know what you guys think, thank you .
MISSLE?
After helplessly witnessing his brother murdered by a vicious gang, a disabled man in LA?sets out one night on his homemade killing machine to seek vengeance.
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