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A bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.
Kinda vague as to what this utopia and the relation to lost in time within this story struggle means. Power hungry can mean anyone, really. Can you specify more where this heroes journey leads us?
Kinda vague as to what this utopia and the relation to lost in time within this story struggle means. Power hungry can mean anyone, really. Can you specify more where this heroes journey leads us?
See lesswhen a women recived text from her child passed away ten years ago ,she try to fined him to prove it is not illusion
Grammatical errors aside, you have stated the vehicle (text msgs) that are a different spin on the story (that's good) but beyond that, what else? must the woman overcome to reunite with her child? Surely, she will not spend 2 hrs asking questions through texts?
Grammatical errors aside, you have stated the vehicle (text msgs) that are a different spin on the story (that’s good) but beyond that, what else? must the woman overcome to reunite with her child? Surely, she will not spend 2 hrs asking questions through texts?
See lessWhen a grieving widow learns her husband took a bullet intended for her, she must survive long enough to discover who wants her dead.
Indicates to me that the antagonistic assassins in this story are inept right from the git go. They fail on the target and give up on the pursuit only to risk another try?In Kill Bill, they left her hopelessly dead. The only reason to consider it done correctly.You can easily fix this by adjusting tRead more
Indicates to me that the antagonistic assassins in this story are inept right from the git go. They fail on the target and give up on the pursuit only to risk another try?
In Kill Bill, they left her hopelessly dead. The only reason to consider it done correctly.
You can easily fix this by adjusting the Protag from “grieving” to something more suited for a potential hero.
That would be a good place to start.
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