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In a dystopian future, when reaching ‘working age,’ teenage rebel defys his destiny set by a leading class oppressors and will fight for living life his own way, even if it means death.
Sounds like he's escaping communism. Don't write the logline as though it's an affect -- examine the formula structure and really think about what your story essence truly is about. His destiny means nothing to me. I don't know him. Fight for living life is what everyone does, every day. Tell us whaRead more
Sounds like he’s escaping communism.
Don’t write the logline as though it’s an affect — examine the formula structure and really think about what your story essence truly is about.
His destiny means nothing to me. I don’t know him.
Fight for living life is what everyone does, every day. Tell us what he really faces in this tale.
His own way? Again, I don’t know this guy.
Means death? How and why does it mean death and what what must he do to avoid the death before what may happen?
See lessA smart sophisticated business woman comes across a document that ends up pushing her to a limit beyond her control.
Yeah, good advice, bivric. This won't get a pass by the cliche police for sure.
Yeah, good advice, bivric. This won’t get a pass by the cliche police for sure.
See lessAfter having her father killed, a farm girl must endure a journey with a tough US marshall to get her revenge.
I think simpler is sweeter with this one: A teenage farm girl hires a drunk Marshal to track down her father's murderer in dangerous Indian territory. It flows better and reads leaner.
I think simpler is sweeter with this one:
A teenage farm girl hires a drunk Marshal to track down her father’s murderer in dangerous Indian territory.
It flows better and reads leaner.
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