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  1. Posted: August 9, 2017In: Thriller

    During WW2, in occupied France, a former underdog cyclist working for the Resistance must compete in a national race organized by the Nazis to secretly carry out a vital microfilm to the Allied Forces at the Spanish border.

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    Added an answer on August 9, 2017 at 5:28 am

    How about: In occupied France, as the Nazis decide to revive the Tour de France as a propaganda tool, a former cyclist working for the Resistance uses the event to secretly carry out a vital microfilm across the country to the Allies.

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    In occupied France, as the Nazis decide to revive the Tour de France as a propaganda tool, a former cyclist working for the Resistance uses the event to secretly carry out a vital microfilm across the country to the Allies.

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2017In: Romance

    When a teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz learns his dream girl is Hitler?s daughter, he decides to stand up from the eyes of the SS and show death is not the only arousing them and not an infatuation he had on her.

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    Added an answer on August 9, 2017 at 1:02 am

    Very interesting. This could be played as a retelling of the classic Romeo and Juliet tale set in the Auschwitz camp. Romeo is the Jewish teenage boy and Juliet is a high-ranking German officier's daughter. Their love faces incredible odds and they must find a way to escape.

    Very interesting. This could be played as a retelling of the classic Romeo and Juliet tale set in the Auschwitz camp. Romeo is the Jewish teenage boy and Juliet is a high-ranking German officier’s daughter. Their love faces incredible odds and they must find a way to escape.

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  3. Posted: July 20, 2017In: SciFi

    Following a near-death experience, a down to earth cop discovers a secret society of astral travelers are manipulating major events in the physical world and works to prevent an imminent attack he suspects they are planning.

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    Added an answer on July 21, 2017 at 5:29 am

    Really interesting. Thanks for the comments. I also just want to say that English is not my first language so it's not always easy for me to translate an idea or a structure from another idiom. But still, there is no way I'm going to make it if don't write this in English. Anyhow, the way I see thisRead more

    Really interesting. Thanks for the comments. I also just want to say that English is not my first language so it’s not always easy for me to translate an idea or a structure from another idiom. But still, there is no way I’m going to make it if don’t write this in English.

    Anyhow, the way I see this that the main protagonist is a cop, maybe suffering from PTSD or something along those lines. He is not a very credible character to start with. He has a car accident that left him with the ability to induce out-of-body experiences. Of course, no one believes him.

    During one of those astral projections trips, he discovers this mysterious society of astral travelers who secretly rule the world by altering and manipulating the physical dimension. He finds out they are about to cause a huge catastrophe in our dimension for their own interest. And this catastrophe has to affect the main character in some way so that he really feels the urge to act (let’s say his daughter or someone from his familiy could die).

    So our cop tries to alert his colleagues, and again, no one believes him. So he really is fighting against this secret society but also against his own people who think he is just a lunatic. What is he going to do? Will he be able to prevent the imminent attack?

    So with that said, I’ll get back to work and come up with a better logline.

    Thank you, guys!

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