1. Posted: December 13, 2017In:

    When an ill girl appears to be cured by his master, an young monk needs to fight his lust to keep on his enlightment path.

    fredsoffa Penpusher

    Not too many movies are sustained by lust. Have you seen Naked? It's lust - but broadly stroked. This seems rather narrow. No mention of love, what does the first sentence have to do with anything anyway? Wouldn't he be just as lustful if she was just there and didn't need to be cured? Needs more

    Not too many movies are sustained by lust. Have you seen Naked? It’s lust – but broadly stroked. This seems rather narrow. No mention of love, what does the first sentence have to do with anything anyway? Wouldn’t he be just as lustful if she was just there and didn’t need to be cured? Needs more

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  2. Posted: March 27, 2018In:

    When en entomologist is trapped by local villagers, he must find a way out of the sand pit if he is to gain his freedom. – Woman in Dunes

    fredsoffa Penpusher

    Okay, thinking this needs more if you're going to sustain a feature. Either the villages just decide to kill him, or he is able to get out easily. Or not easily. But he needs more than just his freedom to get out, that's already stated. and why is it called Woman in Dunes if it's about a guy?

    Okay, thinking this needs more if you’re going to sustain a feature. Either the villages just decide to kill him, or he is able to get out easily. Or not easily. But he needs more than just his freedom to get out, that’s already stated. and why is it called Woman in Dunes if it’s about a guy?

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