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  1. Posted: July 30, 2017In: Fantasy

    When a portal to hell mysteriously opens, an inexperienced mage born of the hellish dimension, is the only one who can close it and bring peace to the kingdom.

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    Added an answer on July 30, 2017 at 10:10 pm

    Many thanks for your feedback. 'An inciting incident should be an event which directly affects the protagonist, something that upends the character?s life and forever changes their status quo, forcing them from inaction into proactively pursuing their objective goal.' I had a sense there was an issuRead more

    Many thanks for your feedback.

    ‘An inciting incident should be an event which directly affects the protagonist, something that upends the character?s life and forever changes their status quo, forcing them from inaction into proactively pursuing their objective goal.’

    I had a sense there was an issue in that area. Thank you for articulating it. I’ll finesse this a little more and see how I go. Cheers 🙂

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