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  1. Posted: September 8, 2016In: Comedy

    An adventure-seeking elderly wife convinces her risk-averse husband to go on a European road trip to honour their friends’ will by scattering their ashes following their unexpected death.

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    Added an answer on September 10, 2016 at 9:48 pm

    Thank you Nir Shelter for your input.?Gives me plenty of food for thought!

    Thank you Nir Shelter for your input.?Gives me plenty of food for thought!

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2016In: Comedy

    An adventure-seeking elderly wife convinces her risk-averse husband to go on a European road trip to honour their friends’ will by scattering their ashes following their unexpected death.

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2016 at 7:25 pm

    Death wakes the couple up to their own mortality and to how their time is running out and sets them on this journey.

    Death wakes the couple up to their own mortality and to how their time is running out and sets them on this journey.

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2016In: Comedy

    An adventure-seeking elderly wife convinces her risk-averse husband to go on a European road trip to honour their friends’ will by scattering their ashes following their unexpected death.

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2016 at 7:23 pm

    Hi both, I have actually been trying to incorporate all the suggestions, but apparently it doesn't?read that way.I guess it is still not clear enough.The death and will is the inciting incident that shakes the wife into realising how fragile life is and she seizes that chance to go on this road tripRead more

    Hi both, I have actually been trying to incorporate all the suggestions, but apparently it doesn’t?read that way.

    I guess it is still not clear enough.

    The death and will is the inciting incident that shakes the wife into realising how fragile life is and she seizes that chance to go on this road trip as she has always dreamed of travelling and going on an adventure. ?The wife’s life long desire to go on a journey drives her to convince her husband to come along hence the: ‘adventure-seeking elderly wife convinces her risk-averse husband to go’.

    I kept European because I think place is important. It is not going to be a road trip in China or Russia or the US.

    And I kept two adjectives to describe the opposing character of the husband and wife, one adventure-seeking and the other risk-averse, as the journey really brings them head to head.

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