1. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When his kids are kidnapped, a workaholic lawyer must return to his childhood and discover who he really is in order to save them.

    Gamling Penpusher

    Very clean logline. Since I first didn't know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film. Good word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a piRead more

    Very clean logline. Since I first didn’t know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film.
    Good word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a picture of him somewhat neglecting his children at the start and not only have to save them, but also change his behaviour.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2021In:

    When terrorists take his wife hostage in a tower at Christmas Eve, a NYPD detective must dispatch of them to set his wife free and reconcile with her.

    Gamling Penpusher

    Well executed logline; starting with the "When", telling us about the main character and ending with the must. We do get two "goals" in this story at the end, but only one major hinder in the beginning (terrorists). Maybe one word that could describe our hero's status with his wife that helps us conRead more

    Well executed logline; starting with the “When”, telling us about the main character and ending with the must. We do get two “goals” in this story at the end, but only one major hinder in the beginning (terrorists). Maybe one word that could describe our hero’s status with his wife that helps us connect with the reconcile part of our hero’s goal. Maybe not necessary, but the only thing I could think of.

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