Thank you so much for the review! I took your 3 suggestions and incorporated them into the logline. Sure, it’s an action packed heist film, but I’ll admit, it needs to have logic if people are going to take it seriously and I’m glad you gave me some examples. Also, your suggestion to spotlight the gangsters I think makes sense because they drive the plot forward in more ways than you think (it did take me awhile to come up with a name for them though). Overall, I think you gave some great examples in order for this film to be more realistic and I will certainly keep that in mind while writing and editing the screenplay.