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Jesus Christ returns to earth with a sword, living under an alias, he does battle with the Devil to save his daughter’s soul.
The greatest story of all. . . Christ?s return. . . not sure you are going for an irreverent, comedic take, or a quasi-biblical story that would draw (some) evangelicals. . .? I like to get some idea of the film?s tone when I read a longline.? Thanks for posting!
The greatest story of all. . . Christ?s return. . . not sure you are going for an irreverent, comedic take, or a quasi-biblical story that would draw (some) evangelicals. . .? I like to get some idea of the film?s tone when I read a longline.? Thanks for posting!
See lessAfter an OCD-afflicted introvert finally gets a chance at true love with an inspiring woman who sees past her condition, jealousy over a casual friendship forces her to face the latent insecurities that threaten her chances.
Perhaps re-writing, being more specific about "gets and chance" and "latent insecurities," would better convey your story.? As it stands, I sort of want to see the film. I know that you are exploring OCD and relationships, but wondering if you leave it up to the film to show your audience how this pRead more
Perhaps re-writing, being more specific about “gets and chance” and “latent insecurities,” would better convey your story.? As it stands, I sort of want to see the film.
I know that you are exploring OCD and relationships, but wondering if you leave it up to the film to show your audience how this person struggles.? ?So maybe experiment with writing a logline without even mentioning OCD.
The story idea actually does sound intriguing, especially is your not dealing with the subject matter in a (overly) comedic way.
Best wishes for success!
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