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  1. Posted: June 14, 2023In: Romance

    A drunken night leaves a young man to decipher his feelings for his best friend before their time together runs out.

    graciemlynch Penpusher
    Replied to answer on June 25, 2023 at 12:50 pm

    Thank you for your advice! I’ve tried to clean it up a bit and add more context at the same time without making it too complicated, let me know what you think! A drunken moment alone during a party leaves two young men to decipher their pent up feelings for each other before one moves away to collegRead more

    Thank you for your advice! I’ve tried to clean it up a bit and add more context at the same time without making it too complicated, let me know what you think!

    A drunken moment alone during a party leaves two young men to decipher their pent up feelings for each other before one moves away to college the next morning.

    I think my issue with this new logline is probably that it doesn’t state whose perspective it is from but I hope the newer version at least supplies more context 🙂

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