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  1. Posted: December 29, 2021In: SciFi

    When her mother disappears in a supernatural event, an estranged daughter communes with a world beyond ours to reconcile with her, but discovers that the traumas of her past are insignificant when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.

    Grahamhi Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 6, 2022 at 5:30 pm

    Thank you. I realise now it's ambiguous as to whose past trauma it refers to. I was actually thinking of the daughter having a troubled relationship with her mother that's led to them becoming estranged from one another, but by the end the daughter is reconciled that the 'living pains' of our shortRead more

    Thank you. I realise now it’s ambiguous as to whose past trauma it refers to. I was actually thinking of the daughter having a troubled relationship with her mother that’s led to them becoming estranged from one another, but by the end the daughter is reconciled that the ‘living pains’ of our short time are ultimately very small in comparison with the cycle of life, which is one of constant renewal – and beyond that, the duration of human civilisation is a very short interval compared with the billions of years the planet’s existence. I suppose the message I’d like people to take away is that life is temporary so we can’t afford to bear grudges or dwell on negatives for our own and those we share life with’s sakes. I really love the idea of the daughter coming to a greater understanding of her mother’s experience, the events that made her mother what she is, and this leading to a deeper appreciation and empathy for her mother, and the sense that she never got the chance to thank her mother for all she did for her. Whether the mother can come back, I’m not sure, perhaps spiritually. Interesting… thank you for your response!

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2021In: SciFi

    When her mother disappears in a supernatural event, an estranged daughter communes with a world beyond ours to reconcile with her, but discovers that the traumas of her past are insignificant when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.

    Grahamhi Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 31, 2021 at 9:35 pm

    thank you!

    thank you!

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  3. Posted: July 23, 2021In: Family

    A suburban family must deal with raising children, neurotic relatives and the arrival of their Pacific Island adopted daughter’s biological uncle who believes culture is more important than family.

    Grahamhi Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 23, 2021 at 3:48 pm

    I really like the sound of this, Ali! My thoughts reading were, in case they're helpful: 1) although it sounds like an ensemble drama, would it be worth drawing out the most prominent character and some kind of dynamic eg. the mother - a put-upon suburban mom with a lazy husband - as the protagonistRead more

    I really like the sound of this, Ali! My thoughts reading were, in case they’re helpful: 1) although it sounds like an ensemble drama, would it be worth drawing out the most prominent character and some kind of dynamic eg. the mother – a put-upon suburban mom with a lazy husband – as the protagonist more – I think it would help connect with it if the reader had an individual to root for, or perhaps the married couple as dual protagonists 2) raising children – sounds a little generic – could it be more unique eg. rebellious children 3) culture – I think coming to it with no knowledge, I wasn’t sure what was meant by culture here – is it possible to be a little more specific eg. cultural heritage 4) overall, perhaps the language could also signal if it’s a broad comedy like Cheaper by the Dozen or a drama with a comedy flavour. Thank you for sharing it. Graham

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