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  1. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Comedy

    The acrimonious break-up of the house couple sparks a cold war between the men and women living in a student house in 1980s Manchester (UK).

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 7:00 am

    I'm not sure what a "house couple" is. Are they the owners of the house the students are living in? I think you need something juicier here that draws us in and suggests what the battle in the film might be about and what's at stake.

    I’m not sure what a “house couple” is. Are they the owners of the house the students are living in? I think you need something juicier here that draws us in and suggests what the battle in the film might be about and what’s at stake.

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Adventure

    waking up dead to realize his victims now hunting for him, a bounty hunter must work with the only guy grateful-to-be-dead, in order to reach NIRVANA INC. (also possible title)

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 6:33 am

    Why does a bounty hunter have to clear his conscience? Bounty hunters chase after bad guys. I think you need an adjective that shows us he was a bit shady in real life so we understand why he needs to arc as a character. The hook/ irony I think is going to be in how you turn the tables on your hero,Read more

    Why does a bounty hunter have to clear his conscience? Bounty hunters chase after bad guys. I think you need an adjective that shows us he was a bit shady in real life so we understand why he needs to arc as a character.

    The hook/ irony I think is going to be in how you turn the tables on your hero, e.g. the bounty hunter learns in the afterlife that the man who employed him was actually the biggest crook and now he has to somehow bring him to justice in order to reach Nirvana. (Just an example).

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