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  1. Posted: September 6, 2016In: Crime

    Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2016 at 3:10 pm

    Thanks Brothers.I am going to work on your points and come back. I very much appreciate your support.

    Thanks Brothers.I am going to work on your
    points and come back.
    I very much appreciate your support.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2016In: Crime

    Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2016 at 12:48 am

    A NEW ?APPROACH ?FROM A MENTOR (dpg) 1) Who is your protagonist ? A renowned ? newspaper columnist and voyeur 2) What is his character flaw? megalophobic and gun-shy , after accidentally wounding a friend 3) Who is the antagonist? Who poses the primary threat to the protagonist? An unforgiving , powRead more

    A NEW ?APPROACH ?FROM A MENTOR (dpg)

    1) Who is your protagonist ?

    A renowned ? newspaper columnist and voyeur

    2) What is his character flaw?

    megalophobic and gun-shy , after accidentally wounding a friend

    3) Who is the antagonist? Who poses the primary threat to the protagonist?

    An unforgiving , powerful and corrupt politician with dictatorial tendencies

    4) What is the inciting incident that kicks off the plot?

    Witnessing ?him kidnap his arch-rival (the people’s choice) , days to elections ,antagonist poisons protagonist but he rather shrinks in size.

    5) As a result of the inciting incident, what becomes your protagonist?s objective goal? What must he do about it?

    Journey to find ?scientist who made poison for remedy and rescue arch-rival by himself.

    6) What?s at stake? That is, what does your protagonist stand to gain if he achieves his objective goal, lose if he fails?

    antagonist would be arrested,arch-rival would be elected for sanity to prevail

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2016In: Crime

    Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

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    Added an answer on September 8, 2016 at 4:59 pm

    OK.And thanks for the info.

    OK.And thanks for the info.

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