1. Posted: September 14, 2017In:

    A dracula who hates killing people for blood finds a companionship in a coward son of a gangster.

    Himanshu Bhatnagar Logliner

    Thanks for the feedback. Here is the new one: A community of Vampires, send Vampires to a haunted house as a punishment for not killing enough people for blood; to avoid this punishment a peace loving Vampire must steal blood from blood banks by befriending a coward Gangster?s son who could take helRead more

    Thanks for the feedback.

    Here is the new one:

    A community of Vampires, send Vampires to a haunted house as a punishment for not killing enough people for blood; to avoid this punishment a peace loving Vampire must steal blood from blood banks by befriending a coward Gangster?s son who could take help from the Vampire to establish himself as a rightful heir of his father’s throne.

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  2. Posted: May 19, 2016In:

    A loser father?s innocent lie, that he is a superhero, puts his kids in trouble who are held as hostages with terrorist; and now he must fight them without breaking his kid?s myth that he is a superhero.

    Himanshu Bhatnagar Logliner

    Thanks for the feedback. Your insight has helped me figure out that there are two things which my log line is telling which I do not wish to ?intend: 1. LOSER - Father is very hard working but is unsuccessful in his profession. 2. SUPERHERO STORY - Superhero story is not for his ego boast but thoseRead more

    Thanks for the feedback. Your insight has helped me figure out that there are two things which my log line is telling which I do not wish to ?intend:

    1. LOSER – Father is very hard working but is unsuccessful in his profession.

    2. SUPERHERO STORY – Superhero story is not for his ego boast but those stories were meant to educate (both academically and morally) his kids. But they took it too seriously.

    Thanks.

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