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"Sleep Monsters" threw me though. Definitely would give a dufferent title some thought.
“Sleep Monsters” threw me though. Definitely would give a dufferent title some thought.
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I like it. To be honest i don't know how, but it may benefit by playing with to economise wording somehow, to reduce it to maybe three lines. This does sound pedantic but something tells me it may be worth thinking about. But nonetheless, evocative and appealing.
I like it. To be honest i don’t know how, but it may benefit by playing with to economise wording somehow, to reduce it to maybe three lines. This does sound pedantic but something tells me it may be worth thinking about. But nonetheless, evocative and appealing.
See lessWhen a doctor is framed and wrongly convicted of killing his wife, he must escape his so called "justice" and find the true killer, the mysterious one-armed man, in order to clear his name.
Evokes the tension but could be more economical. You could delete "his so called justice", "true killer" - gives away part if the plot, and "in irder to clear his name as it is both redundant, and gives away plot and steaks tension.
Evokes the tension but could be more economical. You could delete “his so called justice”, “true killer” – gives away part if the plot, and “in irder to clear his name as it is both redundant, and gives away plot and steaks tension.
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