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21 year old guy attempt's to jump his motorbike over a broken bridge but fail's when realising the gap in the bridge is to Wide
I like the concept, but I feel like it's missing the dramatic hook. What else is in his way, from preventing his goal? A girlfriend? Cops? State officials? Is he a daredevil trying to get permission from the state to Jump the bridge? Best of luck!
I like the concept, but I feel like it’s missing the dramatic hook. What else is in his way, from preventing his goal? A girlfriend? Cops? State officials? Is he a daredevil trying to get permission from the state to Jump the bridge? Best of luck!
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I think you can write a better logline. The logline is kind of bland at the moment. Why are these ten people important? I think you should also have an antagonist in the logline. You can do it!
I think you can write a better logline. The logline is kind of bland at the moment. Why are these ten people important? I think you should also have an antagonist in the logline. You can do it!
See lessA nerdy kid from New York City moves to Oakland and tries to get the most popular girl in school to ask him out.
I think the concept has potential, but I think you should rewrite it. I think your logline is missing conflict.
I think the concept has potential, but I think you should rewrite it. I think your logline is missing conflict.
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