1. Posted: January 26, 2020In:

    When an avid lens collector takes a photo with a mysterious camera, he is captured in a murder he can only hope to escape.

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    Ok. After the help of all of those that posted on this one and with a little help from my partner, we revised the logline and? both feel it is a good fit.   When a possessed camera converts an innocent portrait into a depiction of predestined murder, a camera collector must resist fate to saveRead more

    Ok. After the help of all of those that posted on this one and with a little help from my partner, we revised the logline and? both feel it is a good fit.

     

    When a possessed camera converts an innocent portrait into a depiction of predestined murder, a camera collector must resist fate to save her lover’s life.

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  2. Posted: January 19, 2020In:

    When a selfish store clerk finds himself in the middle-ages, he clumsily awakens an ancient evil in an effort to return home; in doing so, he finds himself fighting armies of un-dead to not only save himself but humanity.  

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    Revision: Unwittingly thrust into the middle ages, a selfish store clerk must retrieve the Necronomicon before the Army of Darkness to return home and save humanity. Full disclosure, I asked my English Major-Partner to help me with this. She can write a pitch.

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    • Unwittingly thrust into the middle ages, a selfish store clerk must retrieve the Necronomicon before the Army of Darkness to return home and save humanity.

    Full disclosure, I asked my English Major-Partner to help me with this. She can write a pitch.

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