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  1. Posted: August 3, 2020In: Action

    On the eve of Pearl Harbor, a plucky and indomitable crop duster fights to become the first female fighter pilot in the Army Air Corps.

    imbatman Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 3, 2020 at 11:28 pm

    No, Pearl Harbor is just an inciting event and reference point for the logline (WW2). We do not see Pearl Harbor and protagonist is not there. Do you feel 'As Pearl Harbor approaches...' would be better? It is not a true story. It is historical fiction based on the Women Air Service Pilot program. TRead more

    No, Pearl Harbor is just an inciting event and reference point for the logline (WW2). We do not see Pearl Harbor and protagonist is not there. Do you feel ‘As Pearl Harbor approaches…’ would be better?

    It is not a true story. It is historical fiction based on the Women Air Service Pilot program. They were the first women to fly for the US military, but they were not allowed in combat. (Women were only allowed in combat within past 5 years, actually.) The WASPs ferried aircraft around so the male pilots could go fight. My screenplay is about a WASP pilot who rebels against her station.

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  2. Posted: August 3, 2020In: Action

    On the eve of Pearl Harbor, a plucky and indomitable crop duster fights to become the first female fighter pilot in the Army Air Corps.

    imbatman Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 3, 2020 at 11:23 pm

    You are entirely correct on the historical fact. The protagonist is a Women Airforce Service Pilot (WASP). As for the rest, well...that's where the adventure lies. :c)

    You are entirely correct on the historical fact. The protagonist is a Women Airforce Service Pilot (WASP). As for the rest, well…that’s where the adventure lies. :c)

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