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  1. Posted: January 17, 2021In: Fantasy

    While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

    InksE Penpusher
    Replied to answer on February 3, 2021 at 4:47 pm

    I've modified it to include what she loses if she fails. Thanks again Rich!

    I’ve modified it to include what she loses if she fails. Thanks again Rich!

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  2. Posted: January 17, 2021In: Fantasy

    While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

    InksE Penpusher
    Replied to answer on January 22, 2021 at 6:11 am

    LOL Rich @ "got more from the title than the logline". I must say, I didn't think constructing a good logline was this involved! :-) Let me know what you think about these versions. Which do you prefer?. Thank you. While on assignment in Europe, a US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincaRead more

    LOL Rich @ “got more from the title than the logline”. I must say, I didn’t think constructing a good logline was this involved! 🙂
    Let me know what you think about these versions. Which do you prefer?.
    Thank you.

    While on assignment in Europe, a US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but finds she has to quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies determined to take her crown.

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    While on assignment, a US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to take her crown.

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  3. Posted: December 21, 2020In: Crime

    When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

    InksE Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 28, 2020 at 11:35 am

    Hi Craig, What do you think of this version of the logline?

    Hi Craig,
    What do you think of this version of the logline?

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