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“In the wake of their caretaker becoming injured, two disabled family members must prove to a social worker that they are best cared for by each other.”
It is a fantastic start which grants you the ability to add color based on your story. Example: Two dysfunctional and disabled sisters have 30 days to prove to a social worker the best care is each other when their caretaker becomes injured.
It is a fantastic start which grants you the ability to add color based on your story.
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After uncovering a grisly homicide near her newly assigned rural workplace a demoted city detective must play a game of cat and mouse with colleagues to reclaim her old job while covertly fighting to attain justice for her daughter.
Leaning towards: When reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.
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See lessWhen reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.
BRIGHT ORANGE BALL – POV Ball. After one of the best soccer players in the world passes over his first soccer ball must convince the legend’s grandson to take up soccer.
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded - what are the stakes? For logline structure reseRead more
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded – what are the stakes?
For logline structure research, lookup movies like The Brave Little Toaster. That bright orange ball is your hook, and I can envision a bridge to becoming something better for both the ball and the player. Keep going! I hope you find this constructive.
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