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When a serial killer uses his exploits as inspiration to become a screenwriter, issues arise when he suspects a colleague of wanting to steal more than just his work.
Interesting, think about the following when reconstructing the logline. 1. What was the event that made him say “hmm, I’m going to be a writer”? I’m looking for a (serial killer size) inciting incident 😊. 2. Can “screenwriter” be replaced with a novelist to capture more of an audience? Stephen King’Read more
Interesting, think about the following when reconstructing the logline.
1. What was the event that made him say “hmm, I’m going to be a writer”? I’m looking for a (serial killer size) inciting incident 😊.
2. Can “screenwriter” be replaced with a novelist to capture more of an audience? Stephen King’s a novelist, you get the idea.
3. I cannot envision “issues arise” what was the most critical issue? You may find later this will change or you could lose altogether.
4. Who is this colleague – his ghostwriter? A rival serial killer?
5. What else does this colleague want to steal? I mean, I wouldn’t want to steal anything from a guy who skins people 😉 but… maybe that other thing is your hook?
Take care.
See lessWhen AI modelling is able to generate an image of someone’s ‘perfect match’ by scanning their brain, a married man must decide whether to secretly pursue a real-life woman that was mistakenly identified as his match by a social media algorithm when he shared his match image (Black Mirror Spec).
While reading this, a yacht rock song by England Dan “It’s Sad to Belong” popped into my head. In DPG’s logline example, I dig the focus on modeling instead of a pic to persuade someone to cheat, also that he removed “mistakenly” to give more intent to your story. I too am a married spud, but we allRead more
While reading this, a yacht rock song by England Dan “It’s Sad to Belong” popped into my head.
In DPG’s logline example, I dig the focus on modeling instead of a pic to persuade someone to cheat, also that he removed “mistakenly” to give more intent to your story.
I too am a married spud, but we all at some point have thought “what if” – would love to see this story follow that rabbit hole 😉
BTW: There could be a “Weird Science” AI/clone version of this, where a spouse would have to compete with their partner’s real-life fantasy lover.
Hope to watch one day, take care.
See lessA self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
Yes, could use some romantic tension, immediate thought "real estate mogul has finally met her match when a handsome eccentric lone holdout refuses to sell” something like that.
Yes, could use some romantic tension, immediate thought “real estate mogul has finally met her match when a handsome eccentric lone holdout refuses to sell” something like that.
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