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  1. Posted: September 4, 2021In: Coming of Age

    The lives of four unique midwestern friends, set in multiple timelines, are forever altered when fame chooses one of them but thrusts all of their lives into chaos.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 7:06 am

    What are these four friends aspiring to become? Example: “The lives of four Midwestern aspiring rockstars are forever altered when stardom chooses only one throwing their longtime friendship into chaos” Keep going.

    What are these four friends aspiring to become?

    Example:
    “The lives of four Midwestern aspiring rockstars are forever altered when stardom chooses only one throwing their longtime friendship into chaos”

    Keep going.

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  2. Posted: September 4, 2021In: Adventure

    We are One with all there is. When the darkness of the Roman Empire grows too strong four people are brought together by those of the light to make the Empire begin to crumble and fall.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 2:49 am

    Consider the following: I can envision an expanse of the Roman empire, but what brought these four protags together and “those of the light” is not in focus. Check out examples in Formula (link header) to help. When a [CHARACTER], is [confronted by a MAJOR EVENT], s/he must [do the ACTION/GOAL]. or:Read more

    Consider the following:
    I can envision an expanse of the Roman empire, but what brought these four protags together and “those of the light” is not in focus.

    Check out examples in Formula (link header) to help.
    When a [CHARACTER], is [confronted by a MAJOR EVENT], s/he must [do the ACTION/GOAL].
    or:
    A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs].

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Examples

    When being accused of cheating on who wants to be a millionaire, a young man from the slum must tell his life story to prove his innocence.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 2:29 am

    Use genre "Examples" to better orientate the reader.

    Use genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

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