1. Posted: June 26, 2022In:

    When home is infested with cockroaches, a paranoid recluse must overcome his need for control in order to destroy his home to kill the infestation.

    Isaac Penpusher

    Thanks for your feedback!

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2022In:

    When their quiet friend kills himself at kick-ons to prove he’s a sick cunt, some aussie larrikins must bring him back to life

    Isaac Penpusher

    I would replace the initial "their" with "a" as we don't know who the "their" is referring to

    I would replace the initial “their” with “a” as we don’t know who the “their” is referring to

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