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  1. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Action

    Female Security Guards coerced into helping commit a massive terrorist attack are torn between protecting their loved ones and National Security.

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    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 10:33 am

    They need the security guards to help get the material into the football stadium. ?They believe that the terrorists will spare their lives as three of the females were romantically involved with three of the terrorists prior to finding out what they did for a living. ?They've been truthful to the woRead more

    They need the security guards to help get the material into the football stadium. ?They believe that the terrorists will spare their lives as three of the females were romantically involved with three of the terrorists prior to finding out what they did for a living. ?They’ve been truthful to the women, never lying even when asked what they did for a living…they said they blow things up.

    Thank you for asking these questions, it helps me to make sure that the plot of the script makes sense.

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  2. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Action

    Female Security Guards coerced into helping commit a massive terrorist attack are torn between protecting their loved ones and National Security.

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    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 8:56 am

    What happens if they don't stop the attack? How would I re-word it if they HAVE to follow along with the plan in order to save the lives of their families? It's a matter of would you let strangers die in order to save the lives of your loved ones. Thank you for all the feedback. I will try to make iRead more

    What happens if they don’t stop the attack? How would I re-word it if they HAVE to follow along with the plan in order to save the lives of their families? It’s a matter of would you let strangers die in order to save the lives of your loved ones.

    Thank you for all the feedback. I will try to make it more precise as to what the storyline is trying to convey.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Action

    In the wake of recent terrorist attacks, four female security guards are ruthlessly coerced to help carry out one of America’s deadliest assaults; one that has the potential to hurt or even kill tens of thousands.

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    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 8:52 am

    Thank you for the response. ?There were four protagonists, each having their own way of dealing with the actions that are taking place. I will have to maybe focus on one, and as you've said have the others as her team. ?In the story, they aren't able to be too proactive in stopping the assault, theiRead more

    Thank you for the response. ?There were four protagonists, each having their own way of dealing with the actions that are taking place. I will have to maybe focus on one, and as you’ve said have the others as her team. ?In the story, they aren’t able to be too proactive in stopping the assault, their families lives are in danger. It’s a matter of would you sacrifice the lives of strangers in order to protect the ones you love?

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