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  1. Posted: February 1, 2019In: Action

    When his brother returns after 12 years with the mob on his trail, a shrewd farmer must find a way to take them all out first, whatever the cost.

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    I don't find this logline interesting except the fact that the protagonist is a?farmer. That too if he somehow uses his farming skills to take out the mob, it will be relevant. Or the idea is to show that he's a simple?man? The premise sounds routine.

    I don’t find this logline interesting except the fact that the protagonist is a?farmer. That too if he somehow uses his farming skills to take out the mob, it will be relevant. Or the idea is to show that he’s a simple?man? The premise sounds routine.

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2019In: Noir

    When a stranger?s corpse tells her he?s an unsolved murder victim, an impetuous journalist must follow his clues and unmask the killer for the story of her career.

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    Added an answer on February 2, 2019 at 2:22 am

    It feels weird that a 'corpse tells' her his story. Does that mean corpse talks to her? If so, it'd have to be either a zombie or a ghost. In that case, you might as well use the actual term. Or the corpse could be part of an experiment?which protagonist?will discover and eventually uncover the scieRead more

    It feels weird that a ‘corpse tells’ her his story. Does that mean corpse talks to her? If so, it’d have to be either a zombie or a ghost. In that case, you might as well use the actual term. Or the corpse could be part of an experiment?which protagonist?will discover and eventually uncover the scientist behind it. I very much like the premise but logline could be more clear and catchy.

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  3. Posted: January 17, 2019In: Biography

    When a self-described ?monster? is released from prison after 25 years, he must confront his past and modern America on the 2000 mile trip home with his only friend for company; the person who betrayed him. That?s me.

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    Added an answer on January 18, 2019 at 8:39 am

    Released after 25 years, a monstrous prisoner must take two thousand mile trip home touching upon the people and places from his?past with the only friend?he has who betrayed him.

    Released after 25 years, a monstrous prisoner must take two thousand mile trip home touching upon the people and places from his?past with the only friend?he has who betrayed him.

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