1. Posted: August 14, 2019In:

    England 1962. Two teenage sisters, sibling rivals who argue over everything, go to an all-night party that launches their career as pop singers. Will they rocket to stardom or fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?

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    Thanks fwiw. It is actually both. It's about trying to make it as a pop-singing duo, and running into personal problems that may derail their goal. I'll give you "the Coppola" technique a try.

    Thanks fwiw. It is actually both. It’s about trying to make it as a pop-singing duo, and running into personal problems that may derail their goal. I’ll give you “the Coppola” technique a try.

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  2. Posted: August 14, 2019In:

    England 1962. Two teenage sisters, sibling rivals who argue over everything, go to an all-night party that launches their career as pop singers. Will they rocket to stardom or fizzle out like a defective cherry bomb?

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    Thanks for your input. Here's another version, but it's much longer: England 1962. When two teenage sisters, sibling rivals, make a demo disc, it launches their singing career. The na?ve, younger sister is a problem drinker and loses her virginity. She finds out she?s pregnant and that her boyfriendRead more

    Thanks for your input. Here’s another version, but it’s much longer:

    England 1962. When two teenage sisters, sibling rivals, make a demo disc, it launches their singing career. The na?ve, younger sister is a problem drinker and loses her virginity. She finds out she?s pregnant and that her boyfriend is married. He persuades her to have an illegal abortion that ends up impacting her whole family.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2019In:

    A jaded billionaire and business executive sends an amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, only to have the reporter uncover a dark decade long conspiracy with the executive at the center of it.

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    I agree with the two previous reviews. I don't understand why the billionaire sends the amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, especially when he knows he is at the center of a decade-long conspiracy that he wants to keep secret.? Does the billionaire have a relationship with the reporter? Did the rRead more

    I agree with the two previous reviews. I don’t understand why the billionaire sends the amateur reporter on a wild goose hunt, especially when he knows he is at the center of a decade-long conspiracy that he wants to keep secret.? Does the billionaire have a relationship with the reporter? Did the reporter come to the billionaire first, and the billionaire tries to misdirect the reporter’s quest?

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