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  1. Posted: September 15, 2020In: Adventure

    Some believe We are One with all there is, connected to the spiritual realms, forces of Nature, animals and are born to do good unto others. But, when the darkness in our world grows too strong, what brings those of the Oneness, three women and a man together, to rise up against the Roman Empire and their God of War?

    Jim Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 22, 2020 at 4:51 pm

    This is a terrible logline and an even worse idea for a movie.

    This is a terrible logline and an even worse idea for a movie.

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  2. Posted: June 4, 2020In: Comedy

    A moving man, unaware of valuable objects in his storage, finds himself chased by mobsters on one side and the US military on the other.

    Jim Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 8:57 am

    This story sounds like it would be much more dramatic if he was aware of the treasure in his storage. The way the logline reads makes me think of a passive character reacting to the mob and US military.

    This story sounds like it would be much more dramatic if he was aware of the treasure in his storage. The way the logline reads makes me think of a passive character reacting to the mob and US military.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2020In: Thriller

    A dangerous serial killer charms his way into a single Mom’s life which brings a talented FBI agent out of retirement to work on the case whilst supernatural Neptune is also awakened to help.

    Jim Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 8, 2020 at 8:55 am

    The problem with this logline is that is starts off as a serial killer story and ends as a fantasy story.

    The problem with this logline is that is starts off as a serial killer story and ends as a fantasy story.

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