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  1. Posted: January 15, 2020In: Drama

    After his vengeful ex-partner in crime recruits his son for a dangerous heist, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding and take his place in order to save him.

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    Added an answer on January 15, 2020 at 11:31 am

    It?s not bad as is. ?It reminds me of ?Gone in 60 Seconds?, except it?s a brother-for-brother substitution (as opposed to father-for-son). ?Here?s the logline for Gone:A retired car thief must return to his former life of crime in order to save his younger brother's life. He now has four days to gatRead more

    It?s not bad as is. ?It reminds me of ?Gone in 60 Seconds?, except it?s a brother-for-brother substitution (as opposed to father-for-son). ?Here?s the logline for Gone:

    A retired car thief must return to his former life of crime in order to save his younger brother’s life. He now has four days to gather a team of boosters and steal 50 cars before it’s too late.

    Maybe you can give a little more detail; maybe it?ll help to follow the Gone logline structure.

    Keep up the good work!

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