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After a getting a call from a mysterious stranger, a college student must perform dangerous tasks that would allow him to save his mother who has cancer.
As a follow up to 85?s comment, what type of ?tasks? is this college student performing? ?You should describe the tasks in a word or two - are they menial tasks (such as raking leaves/taking out the garbage/painting for the stranger)? Or are they more dangerous in nature - kill someone, find someoneRead more
As a follow up to 85?s comment, what type of ?tasks? is this college student performing? ?You should describe the tasks in a word or two – are they menial tasks (such as raking leaves/taking out the garbage/painting for the stranger)? Or are they more dangerous in nature – kill someone, find someone, expose something sinister etc.? ?I don?t think you mean that the tasks are menial/routine tasks; so you should qualify ?tasks?.
Also, needs a touch more refining – but, a good start.
See lessAfter his vengeful ex-partner in crime recruits his son for a dangerous heist, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding and take his place in order to save him.
It?s not bad as is. ?It reminds me of ?Gone in 60 Seconds?, except it?s a brother-for-brother substitution (as opposed to father-for-son). ?Here?s the logline for Gone:A retired car thief must return to his former life of crime in order to save his younger brother's life. He now has four days to gatRead more
It?s not bad as is. ?It reminds me of ?Gone in 60 Seconds?, except it?s a brother-for-brother substitution (as opposed to father-for-son). ?Here?s the logline for Gone:
A retired car thief must return to his former life of crime in order to save his younger brother’s life. He now has four days to gather a team of boosters and steal 50 cars before it’s too late.
Maybe you can give a little more detail; maybe it?ll help to follow the Gone logline structure.
Keep up the good work!
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See lessA married man begins dating a woman via lucid dream technology, but things get strange when she starts appearing when he?s awake.
I think this sounds quite interesting - I?d watch it as is. ?Though, I think the actual logline needs to be tightened and refined. ?Maybe start it with: ?Using lucid dream technology....?.
I think this sounds quite interesting – I?d watch it as is. ?Though, I think the actual logline needs to be tightened and refined. ?Maybe start it with: ?Using lucid dream technology….?.
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